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the fist scene

the fist scene
this scene is one of the fist scenes that came first. when they said all that stuff to jack i just knew that he was going to be one of the bad ones and then about simon i kind of thought that he was going to be the first one to be killed but i thought he will be killed by falling then hitting his head on a rock or somthing

pig head

pig head
this was also one of my favorite scenes because simon was killed during this chapter just beause he was trying to do them a favor and all they did do him over and that was one of the saddest parts in this whole book becides when piggy dies

Monday, March 10, 2008

Blog #9 “It was a accident! Or was it?”

I dreaded for that day to come and it came somebody was killed, and it was my good old friend Simon I've been trying to convince Ralph that it was a accident and not a murder. “no it wasn't it was a murder jack killed him he knew they was going to after the beast because they was scared he noticed that Simon wasn't there he hypnotized them with the dance” said Ralph

No it was not a murder, think about it it was dark they was scared we was all scared i bet you also thought that, that was a beast it was dark lightning,” I told him to calm him down, “they tried to stifle him so he wont try to bite them like if he was a vampire or some thing you saw them they didn't know he started to shudder and then he stopped moving and that was the end.”

well maybe you are right but who really knows right now all I'm going to start caring about is the rest of the people that is one my side and if we get rescued or not wow i really miss my dad” there was a long pause for a moment and then we heard something in the distance it was samneric we could tell because they was talking like one “oh no samneric is coming and they still do not know that we was a the party so don't talk much about it” we really didn't talk much about Simon it was also a very short talk before the sun went down then we went to bed


piggy, piggy are you awake i think i hear something outside. Piggy!”

5 more minuets mommy i don't want to go to school”

piggy!”

oh I'm sorry i was dreaming, awwww stop hitting me Ralph that hurts”

I'm not hitting you aww stop piggy! What jack what are you doing”

run away! i have what we came here to get!”said a deep voice. The people that was beating us up left and ran away i was in the corner because of my asthma they tried to smother me so i was the corner breathing deeply. Ralph went out side i crawled behind him and we seen jack and some of the bigums running with my glasses.

Why didn't they take the conch?” i asked “I'snt just as important as the glasses?”

well for his group i jess not”

the moon was bright and the phosphorescence of it was grate i decided to just sit there and look at it but i could tell that the sun was going to start to rise

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