why me? why did I have to get corrupted? why me? why did i have to go tell the guys that the beast was a fake? why me? why did i get ataked and bit and scrached to death? but the real question is WHY US? if it wasnt for the plane crash i wouldnt be sitting here saying why me, why me. well i think it was a sign maby it was my time to go made it was a stupid mistake but now nobody would ever know.
ya i saw the pig talk to me and right there i knew that somthing was going to happen to me but i didnt know how or when i just had to be ready after the pig said what it had to say and i woke up it dawned on me that i had to see if there was really a beast in top of the hill because i did not belive it so i started to go up the hill in a stedfast pace when i reached to the top of the hill i saw this thing the wind was moving it around i went up to it it was just a dead parachutist i was going back to tell the guys that the beast wasnt real i started to trickle down the hill slowly i fell then when i arrived by where the guys was they was doing some weird dance and i was tremulousing so much and then they saw me and ran tords me they attacked me i tried to get away it hurted so badly i felt all the life just go out of me it felt like i still had all of the pain still in me afer my soul was gone i washed away the water felt good on me i imagined and then i was gone
Tuesday, March 4, 2008
why me? blog #8
Posted by Lexus' Blog at 11:31 AM
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2 comments:
I like the question you used wher it said "WHY US? if it wasnt for the plane crash i wouldnt be sitting here saying why me, why me." It really shows how Simon would think. You used alot of your vocab words wrong like trickle and there were a lot f spelling mistakes like scratched
I like how you started the blog with a question. I like how you made him sounds like a humble good person like when you said "well i think it was a sign maby it was my time to go "
you made hims sounds like it wasnt their fault and it was a mistake.
Theres a few spelling mistakes and capitalization and you might wanna make it a bit longer but besides that good job.
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