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the fist scene

the fist scene
this scene is one of the fist scenes that came first. when they said all that stuff to jack i just knew that he was going to be one of the bad ones and then about simon i kind of thought that he was going to be the first one to be killed but i thought he will be killed by falling then hitting his head on a rock or somthing

pig head

pig head
this was also one of my favorite scenes because simon was killed during this chapter just beause he was trying to do them a favor and all they did do him over and that was one of the saddest parts in this whole book becides when piggy dies

Tuesday, March 4, 2008

why me? blog #8

why me? why did I have to get corrupted? why me? why did i have to go tell the guys that the beast was a fake? why me? why did i get ataked and bit and scrached to death? but the real question is WHY US? if it wasnt for the plane crash i wouldnt be sitting here saying why me, why me. well i think it was a sign maby it was my time to go made it was a stupid mistake but now nobody would ever know.

ya i saw the pig talk to me and right there i knew that somthing was going to happen to me but i didnt know how or when i just had to be ready after the pig said what it had to say and i woke up it dawned on me that i had to see if there was really a beast in top of the hill because i did not belive it so i started to go up the hill in a stedfast pace when i reached to the top of the hill i saw this thing the wind was moving it around i went up to it it was just a dead parachutist i was going back to tell the guys that the beast wasnt real i started to trickle down the hill slowly i fell then when i arrived by where the guys was they was doing some weird dance and i was tremulousing so much and then they saw me and ran tords me they attacked me i tried to get away it hurted so badly i felt all the life just go out of me it felt like i still had all of the pain still in me afer my soul was gone i washed away the water felt good on me i imagined and then i was gone

2 comments:

Dimitri's Lord Of The Flies Blog said...

I like the question you used wher it said "WHY US? if it wasnt for the plane crash i wouldnt be sitting here saying why me, why me." It really shows how Simon would think. You used alot of your vocab words wrong like trickle and there were a lot f spelling mistakes like scratched

luis m said...

I like how you started the blog with a question. I like how you made him sounds like a humble good person like when you said "well i think it was a sign maby it was my time to go "
you made hims sounds like it wasnt their fault and it was a mistake.
Theres a few spelling mistakes and capitalization and you might wanna make it a bit longer but besides that good job.